15-09-2011
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واكون سعيدة كتير They were three guys. They were friends. They were talking with each others and suggested that they go to a trip to the beach. And they were preparing for the trip . now , they went to trip .they were happy. They were playing ,talking and laughing . they were on the beach and they had a lot of fun it first day. It was a house beside the beach.
First time they went to swam and they were playing on the beach. One of them was lair to make fun. He doesn’t know how to swim, sometimes they go to swim and the guy doesn’t know how to swim. He just go a little bit down and try to learn the swimming .he go back to home . and he was so happy because he was trying to learn.
Second time. They went to swim and the guy doesn’t know how to swim he try again .the other guys went to home .when they done from swimming and they leave him alone on the beach and he try by his self how to swim. When he was trying he is drowning and he was trying to save itself but he can’t and then he said out loud HELP ME! The others guys didn’t heard him when he said help me it first time.
But the second time they heard him but they laugh and one of them said to others don’t care about him, He is kidding . the guy is drowning and he still say. HELP ME but no one heard him accept his friends and they also thought he was kidding with them because he always was kidding with them. Suddenly, At the time, came some of people and the guy saying help me. The one of people come and saw him. He is drowning and needs help. they went to help him. When he came out from drowning. HE was so tired even he can’t talk with the people were helping him. The people stay with him and they want to know where is the home. There were ask him but he can’t talk. One of his friend told the others guys. We didn’t see him . I want go to see him . and I want to tell him come enjoy with us and stop learning for today . come with us we going to play a game. He went to him and when he is going to him . he saw people around person but he doesn’t know who is that. When he was more nearly on the beach. He saw his fried. He was running to go to them . when he was running he want to know what’s going on ? he came to the people. He told them what’s going on ? I can’t believe that . he doesn’t understand what’s happing with his friend. And he ask the people around him. What’s happened with him ? the people said. Do you know him? The guy said . yes , he is my best friend . He tell them, told me what’s happening with him ? one of the people said I don’t know this guy but I was walking with my friends and I saw this guy was drowning and saying (HELP ME)
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I just same to help him . when I took him out . he was so tired . his friend said let’s took him to home. they said okay, that will be good. When they come to home they try to wake him up. But he almost wake up but not really good. His friend said lets go outside and let him relaxes and sleeping .they go outside. They were talking and talking about him. One of the people ask his friend . Have you heard his loud voice when he was drowning? His friend said, Yes, I heard him when he said help me but I thought he is kidding because he is always saying things and after couple mints he say I’m just kidding He is always do that. That’s why we didn’t care about him The people was so happy because they help him and they knew his friends and they save him from death. Whatever! The people said praise be to god for his safety. His friend said ,Thank you so much for helping him. He told them come to visit us in our home. people said, oh thanks you so much we will. when the other friends come and knew it what’s happing to them. They were so sad about him and the guy was drowning wake up and he go to thank them for helping him.
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Finally, They got the dinner with them .They were so happy and friendly. تحياتي للجميع |
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