مساعده سريعه الله يجزاكم خير

[الغاليه]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
انا عندي بريزنتيشن بكره عن فيلم اعجبكي وليش اعجبك وهل تنصحين فيه ولالا
المهم مده الكلام لايقل عن 3 دقايق
انا حاولت اكتب بس ابيكم تصححون لي وتساعدوني بالباقي الله يعافيكم
هذا اللي كتبته عن فيلم تايتنك
my fauvirote movie is titanic .ilike this movie because it has avery intersting and true story.there is abig cheap in atlantic ocean.there is arich girl her name rose and poor boy his name jak .she love jak but her family wanted to get marrid with arich man .suddnly, the cheap accedent the ice mounten and drowned in to the ocean .most the people are died. the end movie jak help rose but jak died and rose life and she is very sad about jak.

هذا اللي كتبته اتمنى مساعدتكم باسرع وقت

[alwrdh]

هلا الغاليه

بعض السبيلنج للكلمات خطأ صلحتها لكي

my favorite movie is titanic .I like this movie because it has
a very interesting and true story. there is a big cheap in Atlantic
ocean. there is a rich girl her name rose and poor boy his name
jak .she love jak but her family wanted to get Marriage
with a rich man .sudden, the cheap according
the ice Mountainand drowned in to the ocean .most the
people are died. the end movie jak help rose but jak
died and rose life and she is very sad about jak.

[الغاليه]

مشكوره يالورده ماقصرتي

[mo0on light]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
انا عندي بريزنتيشن بكره عن فيلم اعجبكي وليش اعجبك وهل تنصحين فيه ولالا
المهم مده الكلام لايقل عن 3 دقايق
انا حاولت اكتب بس ابيكم تصححون لي وتساعدوني بالباقي الله يعافيكم
هذا اللي كتبته عن فيلم تايتنك
my fauvirote movie is titanic .ilike this movie because it has avery intersting and true story.there is abig cheap in atlantic ocean.there is arich girl her name rose and poor boy his name jak .she love jak but her family wanted to get marrid with arich man .suddnly, the cheap accedent the ice mounten and drowned in to the ocean .most the people are died. the end movie jak help rose but jak died and rose life and she is very sad about jak.

هذا اللي كتبته اتمنى مساعدتكم باسرع وقت


اهلا الغاليه

اختي الورده ماقصرت
بس عندك خطا في القواعد في she love
المفروض تقولين she loves or she falls in love with
اتمنى اكون ساعدتك ولو بشي بسيط

[الغاليه]

يعطيك العافيه

[Genius]

hi
sorry ,for i am late
i have just corrected some grammar mistakes
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My favourite movie is a Titanic. I like Titanic movie because it has a very interesting
scenes, reflects true story and involves many (film) stars . There was a big ship was sailing across
Atlantic ocean, there was a rich girl whose name was Rose ,also there was a poor boy whose
name was Jak. Rose fell in love with Jak but her family wanted her to get mariage
with a rich man, suddenly the ship collide with the ice mountain and drowned into
the ocean, the most of people were died. At the end of movie( or story) Jak strove to
save Rose from drowning and keep her to be survive. Finally Rose survived but Jak died.
Rose felt by sadness because Jaks death.
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[alwrdh]

اهلا الغاليه

اختي الورده ماقصرت
بس عندك خطا في القواعد في she love
المفروض تقولين she loves or she falls in love with
اتمنى اكون ساعدتك ولو بشي بسيط


شكرا لك و لتنبيهك

و منكم نستفيد

:A6:

[alwrdh]

hi
sorry ,for i am late
i have just corrected some grammar mistakes
=================================
My favourite movie is a Titanic. I like Titanic movie because it has a very interesting
scenes, reflects true story and involves many (film) stars . There was a big ship was sailing across
Atlantic ocean, there was a rich girl whose name was Rose ,also there was a poor boy whose
name was Jak. Rose fell in love with Jak but her family wanted her to get mariage
with a rich man, suddenly the ship collide with the ice mountain and drowned into
the ocean, the most of people were died. At the end of movie( or story) Jak strove to
save Rose from drowning and keep her to be survive. Finally Rose survived but Jak died.
Rose felt by sadness because Jaks death.
==================================

Thanks for your help

thank you very much

[Genius]

You are welcome

[الغاليه]

thank you all people for help me